In
a
series
of
hic
coughs
prot
o
words
stretch
halfway
to
a
thought
re
tract
to
almost
ism
ish
ness
just
shy
of
fact
no
pal
imp
sest
evolves
no
trace
no
track
just
free
fall
shudder
fade
to
black
a
series
of
hic
coughs
prot
o
words
stretch
halfway
to
a
thought
re
tract
to
almost
ism
ish
ness
just
shy
of
fact
no
pal
imp
sest
evolves
no
trace
no
track
just
free
fall
shudder
fade
to
black
Comments
what I liked about your verse was the effortless freedom of it. Obviously you
can just turn on that mode of thought-- so why not book length?
Epic!